Fragile were my life's canoes,
Restless were my will's torments.
It was life at hell for me..and I stood there gazing at nothingness.
..(But)
Ever since I met you O' dear pal,
Neither sorrows nor gloom did I meet.
Darkness was just a mirage, and
Strength was the shadow that followed me.
..(As)
Humanity..is for humans,
Integrity..for the immaculate,
Perpetuity is for paeans;
...Friendship..is for the soul in me and the friendship in me is for YOU..!
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However when you added additional lines, and break the word up in the wrong place, it cease being an acrostic.
... but it's one of you best and I loved the ending.
Thanks a ton for your thoughts on this. I'm honored!
Thanks a ton kind ma'am for your thoughts. And the reason behind those lines within the parenthesis is as an impetus to the word flow. I could have as well added them with the previous lines, but, I felt that it would lead to a better enunciation when inserted between two stanza points.
Thanks for pointing it out. Infact I had plans of putting a footnote as an explanation to these parenthesized words- I am glad that you pointed them.
Happy to see you here and I am glad that I have been an electron in lighting it up!
@ Chinmaya..
Thank You!
@Ofira..
Thanks a ton for your words of encouragement!
Thank you!. I am glad that you liked this.
@ Navin.
Thanks a ton for your thoughts pal.Yeah, Not a pure acrostic..Its just that i wanted to make the structure this way..:)
@ Gautham.
Thanks a ton for sharing your thoughts on this dude!
god bless
Thanks a ton for you kind and encouraging words..:)
@ Anthony
I am honored by your words sir.
Thank You!
@Maggie.
YOu got that bang on ma'am. Those words of yours gives an one-line insight into this write.
Thank You!
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