...I am an eclectic amalgamation of many seemingly paradoxical things. This can be exemplified in both my seemingly endless persistance on many topics and arguments, as well as my careful cautiousness on other topics and arguments. This is largely due to how astute I am of the topic: more knowledge, more persistant; less knowledge, obviously more cautious. I also have times of obsessive compulsions regarding certain things (mostly just my thoughts, however)...
Life
An assembly
Possibly impossible
Perfectly interchangeable..
Death
That lives most upright
Beyond the unspoken
Neither a squiggle nor a quibble..
She
A daffodil
Tyrannizer of me
Breaking the colors of dusk!..
Me
The rising sun
Infringed with violations
The impurity in the salt..
Love
A puerile desire
Buried in the heart
Never leaves..
Poetry
Sentimentally melodramatic
Cursively recursive
My thoughts idiotic!
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Beautiful :-)
Ghostly past
Indeed!. Its such a pleasing sight :)
Thanks for your thoughts!
Thanks a ton kind people. I am gladdened by those words of encouragements from you..:)
You are welcome. That was just a passing thought..:)
@ Gauthami.
Ah, that state is remoulded onto me too.
Thanks A ton for dropping in..:)
You can find all the prompt site news on my blog.
Thanks a lot for sharing you thoughts on this.
Sure! I will drop in to participate in more prompts that are on display there..:)
@ Prats and @ Shal..
Thank u:)
wow!!
I decipher me!
the world within this word!
(u deciphered or u encoding it?)?
You've actually caught the theme of the poem red-handed..:)
The thought-child behind this was to encode my thoughts via poetry and thus deciphering my morose.
Its more metaphorical, I must say.
"Watching the tainted sky"
This is metaphorical to my life, which is in a catch-22 situation,neither here nor there.
"Meandering from crimson to black"
The state of my life moving from bad to worse.
".I decipher me."
You can see the two dots there, they indicate the pauses in the transition from my thoughts being crimson to thoughts being black
And then the last two lines indicate the deciphering part wherein i decode my thoughts and encode it into a poem, and getting back to where i was-"back to watching the tainted sky"
We all come back to the place we had started or at least track back through the same path of uncertainty.
Rest lies inside your poem.
Beautifully put.
Beautiful words, I love watching the sky - there's a beautiful waxing moon here tonight...
Whistles!!
The third line creates the impact, least to me. "I decipher me." Read it as the last line of the first half and then as the first line of the latter.It Waxed, then Waned and it did the rest!!
Beautiful :-)
..introspective and thought -provoking [thank u for ur valid pointer on my post following which i've made a replacement]
I have never been able to decipher myself..
Ghostly past
@ SweetTalkingGuy
Indeed!. Its such a pleasing sight :)
Thanks for your thoughts!
@ Meena and Karen.
Thanks a ton kind people. I am gladdened by those words of encouragements from you..:)
@ Zoya.
You are welcome. That was just a passing thought..:)
@ Gauthami.
Ah, that state is remoulded onto me too.
Thanks A ton for dropping in..:)
Getting to know yourself isn't easy, but great words.
You can find all the prompt site news on my blog.
simple but still beautiful !!
:):)
@ Anthony..
Thanks a lot for sharing you thoughts on this.
Sure! I will drop in to participate in more prompts that are on display there..:)
@ Prats and @ Shal..
Thank u:)
though i dint get the poem, the middle thing caught my sight.
wow!!
I decipher me!
the world within this word!
(u deciphered or u encoding it?)?
@ Mahesh..
You've actually caught the theme of the poem red-handed..:)
The thought-child behind this was to encode my thoughts via poetry and thus deciphering my morose.
Its more metaphorical, I must say.
"Watching the tainted sky"
This is metaphorical to my life, which is in a catch-22 situation,neither here nor there.
"Meandering from crimson to black"
The state of my life moving from bad to worse.
".I decipher me."
You can see the two dots there, they indicate the pauses in the transition from my thoughts being crimson to thoughts being black
And then the last two lines indicate the deciphering part wherein i decode my thoughts and encode it into a poem, and getting back to where i was-"back to watching the tainted sky"
Above all it just gives us a basic concept that is obvious in an introspection...
We all come back to the place we had started or at least track back through the same path of uncertainty.
Rest lies inside your poem.
Beautifully put.
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