For once I lost myself in her hand-ofF,
All my prowess' got diluted, what remained is just an iotA.
To and fro did my heart hubbub quibbling between a treat and a retreaT.
Ah!, I just got myself melted onto hers, was it an heaven that I saw from abscissA?
Lo!, or was it just another dream about my princess damseL?
Altercations continued. This time between her eyes and mine; Both in a perfect galA!
"Take me by hand darling,I am all yours"- did I hear her say thaT?
Tremors hit my hands,quakes shook my hearT,
Race had begun and my clutters began its clutters like a call stuck pageR
Ahoy! would I be really succesful? - would she accept my heart's pleA?
Coyish cabrioles I made, hoping towards her to utter my three worded macaroniC
Trusting with deep trusts that she would be mine and me her sweeT.
"I love you dear, Do you love me too?"- whispered I-extending the rose,more like an alibI.
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"Ouch!!, that hurt" she said, blood oozed out of her palm[thorns had pricked], forming a capricciO..
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"Never mind, Sir..I will take care, I am her maN"
...Said an obscure voice from behind. And thus fell my stillborn attraction into fatality...
Foot Note :
Intended meanings of italicized words.
1.Abscissa : from a distance
2.Pager : A small device (like cellular phone) that vibrates to inform the wearer about a text message.
3.Macaronic : denoting a language, specially burlesque verses.
4.Alibi : an excuse
5. Capriccio : A painting representing mixture of colors and imagination.
[ These meanings are the first meanings of the words' usage which I had learnt as a part of my curriculum. If there is any mistake please let me know. Since I have not verified them with a standard dictionary ]
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nice.. :-)
its so very your style!!
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Thanks a ton for liking it..;)
Yup..My core domain..:P
Thank You!
Thanks a ton kind people..:)
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yay! Hi-5!!:D
Thanks a ton kind people for those words of encouragement..:)
Thanks for dropping by..You'd find some masterly talent here at this prompt, and I'm a part of newbies too..:)
Thank a ton dearie..:)
I am happy that you liked it..:)
I am happy that you liked this buddy..
Thanks for your words of encouragement..:)
Thanks a ton for sharing your thoughts here. And Yup!, I am really looking forward to read you double acrostic..Its actually some real fun amalgamated with some huge effort..;)
Hehe! just too good! The metaphors used are too amazing! Wonderful piece. :)
Your kind, I mean this kind of writing comes natural to you, doesn't it? Too good :-)
Really attracted to this...
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Really attracted to this...
nice.. :-)
i and @ Gayu..
Thanks a ton kind people..:)
Awesome!!
its so very your style!!
As usual! You the man *thumbs up*
@ Spoo..
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Thanks a ton for liking it..;)
@ karen.
Yup..My core domain..:P
Thank You!
@ Meena..
:D
yay! Hi-5!!:D
A great story in metaphor.
Good one :) I like the story :)
At both ends! Being new to the acrostic I am amazed!
definitely the best !! you are the genius dude :)
@ Anthony, @ Navin.
Thanks a ton kind people for those words of encouragement..:)
@ Rinkly..
Thanks for dropping by..You'd find some masterly talent here at this prompt, and I'm a part of newbies too..:)
@ Prats..
Thank a ton dearie..:)
I am happy that you liked it..:)
intresting as ever,especially d style tat u've used tis time round..very good usage of words as well..
@Chinmay
I am happy that you liked this buddy..
Thanks for your words of encouragement..:)
I see you had lots of fun with this one. A nice acrostic story, and yes, fatal attractions are not all bad.
Wanted to come back and say something I forgot to mention, IV ... double acrostic are very hard, and I am glad to see a few of you all doing it. I am going to give it a try very soon.
Thanks a ton for sharing your thoughts here. And Yup!, I am really looking forward to read you double acrostic..Its actually some real fun amalgamated with some huge effort..;)
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