Crashing's are violent and violent are the crashes,
Oh pity, the fragile canoe in she.
Undone was she by his and outclassed was her's by him.
Ragged out and torn apart was her feminine dignities, by the brutality in his filthy canine.
Alas!,doomed are her dreams and damned are her zeals, Her life,now a trod. So,
Get up, all you motherly angels-Fight this deadly act,
Egress forth thy anger, leathalize thy endurance-butcher out this bastardly bastardy with utmost gut and Courage!
Prompted at Acrostic Only
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Nice write up!
Ma'am I shall mail thee the write with a bigger font size. Thank you for pointing it out!
Bharath,
Thank you so much for sending me your acrostic in a manner so I can read it.
I must say it gave me smiles as I thought of a gentle refined lady dealing with a (dog) man.
You did good and I enjoyed reading this poem.
i'm happy that you likd this pal..:)
Thanks for bestowing thy words of encouragement!
i'm happy that you likd this pal..:)
Thanks for bestowing thy words of encouragement!
I am extremely gladdened by your words of appreciation and encouragement..
I am honored!
Thank You!
Thanks a ton..
These were the brain-child of some recent news' pouring out over assault of women..
I am glad that you liked this mediocre write of mine..:)
Dark and deep!!! I like it!!!
loved the theme, its brilliantly put thoru.
Nice write up!
My vision is bad and this type is too small for me to read...Sorry:(
IP I can see you worked hard on this one ... and I enjoyed it.
Wow, dramatic! I love how you took the prompt and soared with it.
When read aloud,Sounds like a speech which calls forth someone to stand up and fight. Livid! Nice :-)
Thanks a ton kind people..I am glad that you liked them..
@ maggie..
Ma'am I shall mail thee the write with a bigger font size. Thank you for pointing it out!
Intresting to see how you've played with words here..
Thank you so much for taking the time to send me a copy of this in my email so I could read what you did with the acrostic prompt.
i really wanted to clap aloud !! but realized on time i was in office ;) !! kudos to this write !1 brilliant :)
This was the comment I sent in the email:
Bharath,
Thank you so much for sending me your acrostic in a manner so I can read it.
I must say it gave me smiles as I thought of a gentle refined lady dealing with a (dog) man.
You did good and I enjoyed reading this poem.
@ Chinmaya..
i'm happy that you likd this pal..:)
Thanks for bestowing thy words of encouragement!
@ Chinmaya..
i'm happy that you likd this pal..:)
Thanks for bestowing thy words of encouragement!
@ Maggie..
I am extremely gladdened by your words of appreciation and encouragement..
I am honored!
Thank You!
@ Prats..
Thanks a ton..
These were the brain-child of some recent news' pouring out over assault of women..
I am glad that you liked this mediocre write of mine..:)
Ah this was the best poem for this prompt!
Brilliant!!! I mostly read Acrostic stuff that were quite concise. But, you've managed to take it in another direction. Great job!!!
Dark and deep!!! I like it!!!
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